Amongst The Clouds

July 20, 2011

Woman on cliff edge in clouds
A short post today for this week’s “festival of smut” as always hosted by the iridescent Ruby Kiddell of The Erotic Notebook. The prompt for this week was “clouds”, to where the characters of this mistily erotic short narrative are bound. As well as describing an erotic scene and applying metaphorical imagery this poem alludes to another aspect of the protagonist’s relationship.

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Amongst The Clouds

Upwards climbing farther towards the shrouded peak,
We pulled ourselves together from the beaten trodden path,
Away from the constrains of familiarity,
Of known taste and texture, of known sight and touch.

Clouds come in! Come in and surround us!
Blind and obscure that we might have a different view.
Tangle our limbs, tied with hands moist and chill,
As goose-bumped flesh shivers ‘neath fingertip’s survey.

In this pale grey-white haze I will give you away,
To wander through the mists and grasp for new lusts.
Ever I will share in your unconstrained desire,
And pull your ravaged body that I might ravage you again.

Clouds come in! Come in and surround us!
Through the soddening wisps our shadows will be seen.
With muscular grasp reaching round to your breasts,
With teeth at your neck and fingers on bud, from behind,
From behind, deep inside.

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This piece of writing is part of this week’s Wank Wednesday festival of smut from Ruby Kiddell of the eroticnotebook.co.uk. You can enter yourself and read all the other wonderful submissions by clicking on the logo.

7 Responses to “Amongst The Clouds”

  1. KaziGrrl Says:

    Mmmmmm, beautiful! and ethereal in its eroticism :)


  2. Very adventurous. Beautiful words and picture

  3. Eroticmoonbeam Says:

    Lovely, I especially like
    “To wander through the mists and grasp for new lusts.
    Ever I will share in your unconstrained desire,
    And pull your ravaged body that I might ravage you again.”

  4. Molly Says:

    Wow, I really like this, it’s one of those pieces that you have to read few a couple of times as even though it is short there is sooo much happening here if you really read into it

    Mollyxxx

  5. jonathanvaje Says:

    nakedinhighheels, Eroticmoonbeam, Molly; Thank you all for your comments, much appreciated.

  6. Gemma Parkes Says:

    Loved it Jonathan. Your poetry is exquisite, a pleasure to read.

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